Life - Watered Down Juice

human life
juxtapositions galore~
watered down juice
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Allison Avatar
January 11, 2021 at 1:52 PM
well said rama, many congrats on your win;-) hugs Jan xx
Balasubramanian Avatar
January 13, 2021 at 3:36 AM
Thanks. Hugs Rama.
Wolf Avatar
January 5, 2021 at 7:48 PM
Ooh! That last line nails the truth right to the wall. Superb senryu, Rama! Peace, Gershon
Balasubramanian Avatar
January 7, 2021 at 10:25 PM
Thanks for uplifting comments Gerson. Have a wonderful day. Take care, Rama
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