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Life Wasted Cm

Past the house I once longed about With naughty kids giggling - These, forgotten in city’s race An intoxication Where power play consumed my time That true kinship-- I lost. Nette Onclaud Contest Choose An Octavio Paz Line 27th August 2019 Line 3

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Date: 8/31/2019 10:43:00 PM
Rora, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/30/2019 5:24:00 PM
One that shows the sadness of a life lost. I really like it. Congrats for your win.
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Date: 8/30/2019 8:02:00 AM
Life is influenced by choices, Rora...but not all goes to waste! Congratulations on your fine win. Regards // paul
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Date: 8/30/2019 1:42:00 AM
love matters most... we all are , somehow, slaves to success... well done, rora... fine congrats with my appreciation for participating in my contest... huggs
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