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Life Suckers

Retroviruses--
the cellular serial 
killers of lil' worlds.

deathsenryu

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Black Eyed Susan

August 15, 2011 at 12:12 PM

ooouuu - nasty little things aren't they? a great senryu - why aren't you posting anything??

Milton Toran

November 7, 2009 at 9:49 PM

Perfect 5-7-5 syllable count. Senryu? Indeed it is! And an excellent senryu as well! Thanks for sharing and keep up the fabulous work! God bless you! Milt

Izzy Gumbo

November 2, 2009 at 11:49 PM

what if junk dna wasn't 'junk' at all... I'd think that junk would have been tossed out long ago. what if it's something so amazingly good rather then not. :) wouldn't that be a big surprise :)

Sara Kendrick

October 30, 2009 at 5:47 AM

You've got that right. Well, are you talking about physical viruses or computer virus. Keep writing. Sara

Moonbee Canady

October 29, 2009 at 5:00 PM

So True ... We Are Addicted to Communication-Technology, (sometimes, without Communicating) ... It's been said, if Aliens did come from outer-space, they'd swear our form included a Phone on our face ... (smile) ... Good Write Ismael ... MoonBee

October 29, 2009 at 2:14 PM

Interesting use of this concise form to give the reader something to ponder about. I've already read it a few times. Keep on writing! Karen

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