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Life Suckers

Retroviruses-- the cellular serial killers of lil' worlds.

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Black Eyed Susan

Date: 8/15/2011 12:12:00 PM

ooouuu - nasty little things aren't they? a great senryu - why aren't you posting anything??

Milton Toran

Date: 11/7/2009 9:49:00 PM

Perfect 5-7-5 syllable count. Senryu? Indeed it is! And an excellent senryu as well! Thanks for sharing and keep up the fabulous work! God bless you! Milt

Izzy Gumbo

Date: 11/2/2009 11:49:00 PM

what if junk dna wasn't 'junk' at all... I'd think that junk would have been tossed out long ago. what if it's something so amazingly good rather then not. :) wouldn't that be a big surprise :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/30/2009 5:47:00 AM

You've got that right. Well, are you talking about physical viruses or computer virus. Keep writing. Sara

Moonbee Canady

Date: 10/29/2009 5:00:00 PM

So True ... We Are Addicted to Communication-Technology, (sometimes, without Communicating) ... It's been said, if Aliens did come from outer-space, they'd swear our form included a Phone on our face ... (smile) ... Good Write Ismael ... MoonBee

Date: 10/29/2009 2:14:00 PM

Interesting use of this concise form to give the reader something to ponder about. I've already read it a few times. Keep on writing! Karen