Life Song

Drift until you leap
Is it joy or do you weep
Giants of the deep

By Robb A. Kopp
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Jimmy Anderson

February 20, 2010 at 5:44 PM

Congratulations, Robb, on another win the contests. ....Jimmy

John Freeman

February 18, 2010 at 9:32 AM

"Congratulations" Robb! ON your placement, Sincere, Agape, Moses

Noel Villarosa

February 16, 2010 at 2:24 AM

Well done Robb on this winning piece. (^_^) Noel.

Doris Culverhouse

February 14, 2010 at 12:36 PM

I like it, congrats on the HM!!

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

February 5, 2010 at 3:15 PM

Dear Robb, Congratulations on YOUR Well Deserved Honorable Mention in Mac McGovern's Contest " Anything Goes " Haiku is my Favorite Form to Write and YOU have done a Superb Job In Honor to the Whales Always...HG

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

February 4, 2010 at 1:17 AM

Congrats on your win with this haiku, Robb :)

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

February 3, 2010 at 3:21 AM

Congratulations Robb, on your Honorable Mention in Mac McGovern’s “Anything Goes” Mini-Poetry contest with this cute haiku. You are in the winners’ circle! Smiles, Dane Ann

Shelli Davis

February 2, 2010 at 6:54 PM

Congratulations on your win! You didn't tell us!

Andrea Dietrich

February 2, 2010 at 1:12 PM

Congratulations in that first contest of Mac's, Robb! LUv, Andrea

Carol Sunshine Brown

February 2, 2010 at 4:56 AM

Congratulations on your win in the contest Robb. May you have many more. Love, Carol

February 1, 2010 at 8:07 PM

Nice use of rhyme for an unusual approach to haiku. Congratulations on being one of the winners in the Anything Goes contest. Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing! Karen

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 1, 2010 at 4:55 PM

Congrats Robb on your winning poem in Mac's Anything Goes contest.. well deserved win for this excellent write.. luv.. and thankxxx for your special comments on my poetry reads...luv.. Linda-Marie..

Carolyn Devonshire

January 31, 2010 at 1:16 PM

Whales, like most of the sea creatures, always seem happy. Like the image of them leaping with joy, Robb! Love, Carolyn

Connie Marcum Wong

January 31, 2010 at 12:56 PM

Having been a whale watcher, I am pretty sure it is joy. Lovely haiku. blessings, Connie

Sara Kendrick

January 31, 2010 at 12:54 PM

Interesting Haiku that you have presented here for I can see all kinds of whales breeching. Don't know if that is what you intended. Thanks for the comments on my poem "Two". Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

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