Life Song

Drift until you leap
Is it joy or do you weep
Giants of the deep

By Robb A. Kopp
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Jimmy Anderson

Date: 2/20/2010 5:44:00 PM

Congratulations, Robb, on another win the contests. ....Jimmy

John Freeman

Date: 2/18/2010 9:32:00 AM

"Congratulations" Robb! ON your placement, Sincere, Agape, Moses

Noel Villarosa

Date: 2/16/2010 2:24:00 AM

Well done Robb on this winning piece. (^_^) Noel.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/14/2010 12:36:00 PM

I like it, congrats on the HM!!

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 2/5/2010 3:15:00 PM

Dear Robb, Congratulations on YOUR Well Deserved Honorable Mention in Mac McGovern's Contest " Anything Goes " Haiku is my Favorite Form to Write and YOU have done a Superb Job In Honor to the Whales Always...HG

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 2/4/2010 1:17:00 AM

Congrats on your win with this haiku, Robb :)

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 2/3/2010 3:21:00 AM

Congratulations Robb, on your Honorable Mention in Mac McGovern’s “Anything Goes” Mini-Poetry contest with this cute haiku. You are in the winners’ circle! Smiles, Dane Ann

Shelli Davis

Date: 2/2/2010 6:54:00 PM

Congratulations on your win! You didn't tell us!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/2/2010 1:12:00 PM

Congratulations in that first contest of Mac's, Robb! LUv, Andrea

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/2/2010 4:56:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in the contest Robb. May you have many more. Love, Carol

Date: 2/1/2010 8:07:00 PM

Nice use of rhyme for an unusual approach to haiku. Congratulations on being one of the winners in the Anything Goes contest. Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing! Karen

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/1/2010 4:55:00 PM

Congrats Robb on your winning poem in Mac's Anything Goes contest.. well deserved win for this excellent write.. luv.. and thankxxx for your special comments on my poetry reads...luv.. Linda-Marie..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/31/2010 1:16:00 PM

Whales, like most of the sea creatures, always seem happy. Like the image of them leaping with joy, Robb! Love, Carolyn

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/31/2010 12:56:00 PM

Having been a whale watcher, I am pretty sure it is joy. Lovely haiku. blessings, Connie

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/31/2010 12:54:00 PM

Interesting Haiku that you have presented here for I can see all kinds of whales breeching. Don't know if that is what you intended. Thanks for the comments on my poem "Two". Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

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