Life Sentence

We’re doing time on planet earth, 
our sentence started right at birth 

The sentence is, we’re here for life 
and with mistakes it will be rife 

The sentence cannot be commuted – 
We’re here ‘til to dust we’ve been transmuted 

We’re sentenced here with other lifers 
& follow each our own Pied Pipers 

We walk our paths from birth to death 
marking time with each drawn breath 

& when our sentence comes to end, 
we hope to heaven we’ll ascend 

Where, free from being bound in time, 
we’ll start to know a joy sublime 
 
And see that real life never dies – 
we just transform like butterflies 

We’ll lay aside our outer shells 
and rise above our private hells
Copyright © | Year Posted 2005

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Richards Avatar
November 30, 2008 at 1:06 PM
Congratulations on this wonderful poem being featured this week. Well done, and well deserved! ~ Carrie
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November 29, 2008 at 9:38 PM
Rev. Rebecca - Congrats on having your poetry featured this week – Great Job & God Bless, MJ
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November 24, 2008 at 6:29 PM
Congrats Reverend, on "Life Sentence" being featured this week. Vince
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November 24, 2008 at 10:56 AM
Your poetry so rocks. Congrats on an awesome featured write. Love you, Shar xoxo
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November 24, 2008 at 6:58 AM
Rebecca, congratulations on this outstanding poem being featured this week. Love, Carol
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