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Life Reloaded

Life is like a long journey along the sea’s shore, Where you sometimes face a heavy downpour and more; Here there are opportunities aplenty each with its own door, Only by opening which you will know what’s in store. Life is a warm and secure feel like the elusive slippery eel, The nonstop movement of a spinning wheel, The lingering aftertaste of a fulfilling meal; Here complete surrender can also help the human heal. Life is like a game of chess which at times leaves no room for a guess: One false step and you may land into an awful mess ; Where you have to keep your head above the flood of daily stress; The excitement akin to going to the party wearing your favourite dress. Life is a song, life is a dance, it is a magnificent trance; A gambler’s den where you have to take your chance; Life is the joy of a long lost and cherished friend’s glance; A memorable and enjoyable trip to France! For certain life is no pest, life is an unending quest, Wherein we are put to the test along with the best and the rest; Let’s try scoring in it with great zest, And make sure to with the bounty fill life’s treasure chest.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 11/3/2015 12:29:00 PM
Congratulations on your win on this fine poem!!
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Suraj Jumani
Date: 11/4/2015 7:33:00 AM
Thank you Terry.
Date: 11/2/2015 11:44:00 AM
Suraj, awesome win. SKAT
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Suraj Jumani
Date: 11/3/2015 10:24:00 AM
Thank you Skat.
Date: 11/2/2015 9:54:00 AM
Congratulations in your win.
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Suraj Jumani
Date: 11/3/2015 10:22:00 AM
Thank you Nayda. I am elated and honoured at the win.
Date: 7/30/2015 1:09:00 AM
Very lovely thots n expressions Suraj!Congrats on ur wonderful winning poem!
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Date: 7/28/2015 9:13:00 PM
Suraj, Congratulations. **SKAT**
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Date: 7/28/2015 1:13:00 PM
Suraj, Congratulations! Thank you for supporting one of the MANY contest I held This Year. I enjoyed reading every entry in this very old contest OF MINE:):):). Stop by my latest blog "EXCUSE ME" if you'd like or have the time. --I'm glad to be back on the wild side of Poetry Soup hosting, new contest. Yours Truly!!! *LINDA*
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Date: 4/9/2015 2:15:00 PM
A 7 for the wonderful spiritual write. Blessings Eve
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Date: 3/26/2015 1:09:00 AM
Very well constructed. You have talent in descriptive writing. You paint a lovely picture of what you feel see and want to share with the reader. Nicely Penned.
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Date: 3/25/2015 9:22:00 AM
Awww . . . Life has been called many things, and you have labeled it quite nicely here also. I have lived my life breaking rules, and at this ripe old age I find myself in, I am exactly where I want to be.
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Date: 3/25/2015 8:34:00 AM
Hey Suraj, congratulations on your poem being featured. This is a wonderful tribute to life - which we take for granted. Beautifully expressed with great imagery. Well done! Be Blessed, Neva
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Date: 3/8/2015 1:21:00 PM
I'm glad you are enjoying this site. Suraj.... Thanks for the sweet reply..LINDA
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Date: 3/7/2015 12:52:00 PM
Nice poem my new poet friend. You are welcome to our Poetrysoup. Always follow the rules and regulation of the Poetrysoup. Maintain the dignity of the P.S. members. Good luck to you to go ahead. Loved always,bl
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Suraj Jumani
Date: 3/12/2015 8:01:00 AM
Thanks BL. Heartily agree with you that we should all follow the ground rules so that everyone continues to have the good time they already are at Poetrysoup.
Date: 3/6/2015 3:11:00 AM
S. JUMANI, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
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Suraj Jumani
Date: 3/6/2015 12:23:00 PM
Thank you Linda for the warm welcome. It does feel a privilige to be part of this exhalted community of my fellow poets. Look forward to enjoying that finest form of human communication - poetry, poetry that stirs the soul and the accompanying thoughts that transform the individual at the deepest plane. Keen to learn from all of you and to read the wonderful poems churned out by my fellow friends here.
Date: 3/4/2015 5:44:00 AM
delightful poem suraj full of insight and good advice too. welcome
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Suraj Jumani
Date: 3/4/2015 9:03:00 AM
Thank you, Steven

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