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Life Refill

Main words used-Life, Sun, Moon, Time, Refill Life draws its curtains too soon Not enough days to appreciate the sun and the moon; Is there a way to make time stand still? Hoping for some sort of a life refill. I selected the above mentioned words as the theme of the poem because they bring out the main essence of the poem, which is to not take time for granted,and live life appreciating all the good things, be it big or small, so that by the end of your life journey, you don't have any regrets.

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Date: 8/8/2024 8:48:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/8/2020 2:58:00 PM
Wise words, Blossompens!
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Blossompens Dhillon
Date: 2/8/2020 11:54:00 PM
Thank you!!

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