Life Poetry

life is poetry; so breathe
poetry in life, put on page.
Poetry gives life.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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August 29, 2017 at 5:47 PM
sorry i put this on the wrong poem...yours is lovley
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August 29, 2017 at 3:26 PM
Lovely Little poem...A little Critique The first two lines should be longer as the 2nd two need to be short and sharp the last line as log as the first two....Just an example Their was an old man named Jack He always ate the whole pack He jumped in the middle and played the fiddle deserving a pat on the back
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August 29, 2017 at 3:15 PM
Great little poem...Wise words
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