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Life Out Loud

One year on will I be gone For no one really knows when those final doors will close Before goodbyes, adios, au revoirs I yearn to go out with a bang if I can to swim with dolphins to sing and to dance to play in an orchestra a piano perchance For the last few years I’ve cried so many tears and the future is looking no better So to cheer myself up I write my future self an uplifting, inspirational letter Dearest Me I send this plea to hear my heart sing a jolly 'ting a ling' With no more tears With no more fears As I happily spend my final years In a world inside my head singing and dancing instead Beneath blue skies ~ no sign of cloud I am joyously living life out loud Onwards and upwards no stopping me now as I climb the tallest mountain board a spaceship to the moon and with gossamer wings I will fly like a bird as I sing aloud the sweetest song that you have ever heard So no time left for letter writing My life ahead looks so exciting…
Written 19th September 2021 Contest Letter to your future self Sponsor Silent One 3rd Place Contest A STRAND (1049) Sponsor Brian Strand FIRST PLACE

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Date: 1/11/2022 11:02:00 PM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 2/9/2022 12:09:00 AM
Thanks for congrats Beata with kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 1/11/2022 7:56:00 PM
Looking ahead very optimistically. Beautiful writing. Congratulations!
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 2/9/2022 12:09:00 AM
Many thanks dear Christuraj with kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 1/11/2022 6:11:00 PM
Excellent and uplifting write! Congratulations!
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 2/9/2022 12:08:00 AM
Thank you so much Kim, with kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 10/17/2021 1:34:00 PM
A heartfelt take on the contest.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 10/17/2021 3:14:00 PM
Many thanks SO for my placement in your contest, and your encouraging comments my friend. I wish you well SO, your poetry always inspires me - thank you. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 10/17/2021 10:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a beautiful/sad~~story/write. Love your line "My life ahead looks so exciting…" Keep your dreams alive. The best is yet to come. Have a great/blessed autumn day.........................
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 10/18/2021 10:22:00 PM
Thank you dear Paula and so glad you enjoyed my words. I try to keep positive despite everything, otherwise life would not be worth living, and poetry is my saviour as i can release all my woes and escape into a wonderful world... with kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 9/20/2021 1:58:00 AM
Its the only way Ann for thus of us who see the glass half full.Cheers
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 9/20/2021 10:30:00 PM
ahh ~ perchance to dream Brian... thanks for your welcome visit my friend ~ with kindest thoughts Ann xx Reply
Date: 9/19/2021 9:56:00 AM
Well written Ann, I hope when you read it the future your dreams will have come true. Tom
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 9/20/2021 10:19:00 PM
Me too Tom, how wonderful that would be... with kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 9/19/2021 8:19:00 AM
Nicely done, Ann, may you climb the tallest mountain, board a space ship, and fly like a bird... Good luck in the contest. :)
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 9/20/2021 10:18:00 PM
Bless you dear Eve, I truly hope I can, haha...thank you ~ with kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 9/19/2021 8:14:00 AM
Lovely letter to oneself. Hugs
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 9/20/2021 10:16:00 PM
Thank you dear Victor ~ with kindest thoughts Ann xx

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