Life Or Death One Liner

To live is not to stare at a sterile space
            but to embrace those who tussle your hair.

10/14/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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May Avatar
October 15, 2016 at 9:02 AM
Congrats on your win Kim!...very nice
Rodrigues Avatar
October 15, 2016 at 9:15 AM
Thank you, Joseph! :)
Singh Avatar
October 15, 2016 at 4:54 AM
Nice. Congrats!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 15, 2016 at 8:30 AM
Thank you Sushma!
Onclaud Avatar
October 15, 2016 at 1:37 AM
marvelous view of life, kim.. big congrats with huggs
Rodrigues Avatar
October 15, 2016 at 8:30 AM
Thank you, Nette! XO
U.D Palawon  Avatar
October 14, 2016 at 11:07 PM
So true...reflective...Congrats. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
October 15, 2016 at 8:31 AM
Thank you, Sunita! :)
Nusker Avatar
October 14, 2016 at 10:27 PM
Oh it's a wonderful line, Kim. Congrats!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 14, 2016 at 10:29 PM
Thank you, Afzal! :)
Haight Avatar
October 14, 2016 at 6:22 PM
Well expressed, Kim. Congratulations on your placement. Hugs, Sandra
Rodrigues Avatar
October 14, 2016 at 8:03 PM
Thank you, Sandra!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 14, 2016 at 8:03 PM
Thank you, Sandra!
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