Life Or Death - One Liner

I enjoyed your poetry. Question. How would I know that my poem is in the contest? I did a poem about a town and I am not sure it is if it is submitted.I did my poem twice then took one of the same poem out. Need advice thank you.

Very good, Tim, congratulations on your win Hugs Eve

I agree with Nette. It's quite dramatic. WELL DONE, Tim. Congrats

Click. Well done.

tim, how dramatic can this be... sweet congrats and huggs

Nice, I cant wait for the french version! :)

Wow! well penned. Congrats. :)

Congratulations Tim on your first place one liner. Made me think of the movie "The Deer Hunter" with Robert De Niro and Christopher Walken

Hi Tim, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis

Congratulations Tim, right on target...so to speak.

Very vivid! Congrats Tim!

Wow...powerful, Tim. Congrats on your fine placement. Sandra

So glad you posted it Tim - you got a top spot!!! Many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

A most original take on this topic, Tim! I have a feeling you're playing Russian Roulette...life or death! Is it my turn now?!! // paul

Oh you chose death ..and described a chilling scene...Goosebumps Tim.. Definitely defines death in all senses.

Dynamic my friend, Tim! Good luck in the contest!

Wow, scary, Tim, good luck in the contest Hugs Eve

Tim, you should shorten it up. It is very good and I want to see it score high!(the middle part could go out!)

Hi Tim, You managed to create dark imagery in a few words. I could sense an intense fear in each word. I wish you the best of luck the contest:-) Alexis

ooh - this is a very different take from others i've read and i like it very much, tim...

Tim, that opening phrase..."Slow the barrel tumbles"....sent a cold shiver through me. A very harsh reality to too many.

I feel the fear :) Great one liner.

so few words yet the images you conjure in my mind is so intense Tim:-) hugs jan xx 7