Life Or Death One Liner

for our life as taken for granted ….  our unfortunate demise is inevitable

13/10/2016
Sponsor - Silent one
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Flower Avatar
October 17, 2016 at 10:16 PM
Such a profound one. Congrats on your win Mark. :)
Van Der Merwe Avatar
October 19, 2016 at 12:02 AM
Thank you Moon Flower - I do appreciate you reading and comments. Regards, Mark
Dietrich Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 7:46 PM
Just now seeing your response from first time I was here. Sorry, I don't usually see responses. I had that option removed. HOpe you are enjoying the end of this October weekend.
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October 16, 2016 at 7:45 PM
So true indeed. Congrats on the winner list.
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October 13, 2016 at 8:01 PM
I like how you did yours. This is true for so many, sadly
Van Der Merwe Avatar
October 13, 2016 at 11:49 PM
Thank you Andrea - I agree that it is a sad reality for many. I try my best to avoid the negativity all though there is so much of it nowadays. regards, Mark
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October 13, 2016 at 8:09 AM
A 7 for your thought-provoking one liner, Mark! Janice
Van Der Merwe Avatar
October 13, 2016 at 8:20 AM
Thank you so much for reading Janice - All the best there Mark
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