Life Or Death One Liner

for our life as taken for granted …. our unfortunate demise is inevitable 13/10/2016 Sponsor - Silent one

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Moon Flower

Date: 10/17/2016 10:16:00 PM

Such a profound one. Congrats on your win Mark. :)

Mark Paul Van Der Merwe
Date: 10/19/2016 12:02:00 AM

Thank you Moon Flower - I do appreciate you reading and comments. Regards, Mark

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/16/2016 7:46:00 PM

Just now seeing your response from first time I was here. Sorry, I don't usually see responses. I had that option removed. HOpe you are enjoying the end of this October weekend.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/16/2016 7:45:00 PM

So true indeed. Congrats on the winner list.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/13/2016 8:01:00 PM

I like how you did yours. This is true for so many, sadly

Mark Paul Van Der Merwe
Date: 10/13/2016 11:49:00 PM

Thank you Andrea - I agree that it is a sad reality for many. I try my best to avoid the negativity all though there is so much of it nowadays. regards, Mark

Janice Canerdy

Date: 10/13/2016 8:09:00 AM

A 7 for your thought-provoking one liner, Mark! Janice

Mark Paul Van Der Merwe
Date: 10/13/2016 8:20:00 AM

Thank you so much for reading Janice - All the best there Mark