Life On the River Bar

I was down on my luck...
     as so many are now.
I wanted to bounce back...
     but didn't know how.
I'd lost my job...
     was too proud to go home.
So I camped on a river bar...
     a place I called home.
It wasn't so bad...
     it could have been worse...
          what happened next one couldn't rehearse.
I'd packed up my stuff and hid it away,
     while I went looking for work...
          which took most of the day.
Upon my return...to my horror I found,
     all of my stuff was just thrown all around.
My sleeping bag and tent had been slashed with a knife...
     so were my clothes...
          that just didn't seem right.
Holes were shot through my canned goods...
     my pans were destroyed...
          I had now hit rock bottom...falling deep in a void.
Even though I'm a man...
     I just sat down on the rocks...
          crying up to the heavens...
               I felt so empty and lost.
I must have been heard...
     cause the next thing I knew...
          I picked myself up...my hope was renewed.
I found some old plastic...
     which kept me dry for the night.
Defeat no longer held me...I was ready to fight.
     I got a new job...got back up on my feet...
          this is one time...
               I hope never to repeat.

                          P.R.Deremer
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Lindley Avatar
September 3, 2015 at 10:20 AM
Great poem. Long ago I was down like that myself, was not easy but I fought my way back.A7
Deremer Avatar
September 3, 2015 at 1:18 PM
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