Sotto Poet Poet Rhyme

Life Mire - Andaree

Written: April 21, 2024 For  Andrea Dietrich Andaree Contest

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Worry and stress weigh heavy on my spirit.
Lately, scowling is my lone licit!
Donning threads I don't desire.
I heave and acquire.
Deep. Dismay!
mire
Life gameplay
Will you tire this dire
Expand; love; improve higher -
Your psyche and flesh are your wickets.
Life isn't obvious, some concern, much merit.

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Andrea Dietrich May 8, 2024 at 1:19 PM I am finally finding some time to get back with poets who I did not put through. Wanted to let you know this was a GOOD poem. I was just being strict on the last line being the same as line one. It's one of the main reasons my winner list was much shorter than usual. You created a fine poem here, Sotto.

Jay Narain April 22, 2024 at 10:12 AM Nice Andaree. Reflects life well.

Vijay Pandit April 22, 2024 at 5:12 AM Some concern some merit--echoes of life resonate throughout my friend.