Life Long Love

When we fall in love our hearts collide to create a hot a fiery passion
That passion is transformed into care and devotion
If you are lucky your love will continue 
And your hearts will remain entwined forever and always.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kendrick Avatar
June 24, 2010 at 3:26 PM
Interesting thoughts that you have penned..Sara
Mehta Avatar
June 23, 2010 at 5:46 PM
Is this Haiku? Please check. I did enjoy the you thoughts well expressed for life long love
Bruinekool Avatar
June 23, 2010 at 5:31 PM
I like the poem itself, but Haiku is an incorrect form for this poem.
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