Life Line

more defining than my laughlines    the line above my cocked brow














17.12.20

Composed for S. Grace's
"wonderful one liners"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Canerdy Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 10:19 PM
A monoku with personality, Maureen! Janice
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 10:36 PM
:) ! Thank you Janice!
Pett Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 10:42 AM
This is a wonderful one liner Maureen, I have that many wrinkles I don’t know which line in which lol, GL in contest. :))
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 10:53 AM
Lol! Mine are just starting. This one I just noticed a couple weeks ago, amused me to no end. Well to this end I suppose :) xomo!
Lawless Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 7:07 AM
don't give me that look Maureen....I like this one.....and I have seen that look too, too often in my days.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 8:04 AM
I really can't help it I swear! Giggles :) xomo!
Stars Avatar
December 21, 2017 at 5:42 AM
A make it always known to face ... tattoo it ...
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 21, 2017 at 6:55 AM
Time is effectively doing that :)
Kannan Avatar
December 21, 2017 at 3:26 AM
Brilliant one.. Reads like a winner...
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December 21, 2017 at 6:56 AM
Thank you Supraja! :) xomo!
Horsman Avatar
December 20, 2017 at 5:09 PM
Oh clever indeed, a winner for me..
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December 20, 2017 at 9:48 PM
Thank you Harry :) xomo!
One Avatar
December 20, 2017 at 3:24 PM
Haha... good one Mo.
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December 20, 2017 at 3:47 PM
Thank you :) xomo!
Michael Avatar
December 20, 2017 at 2:43 PM
Written clearly for others to see...you get the mirrored version to forget quickly. Just joking... I called it " A Power Line" All the best Maureen
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December 20, 2017 at 3:45 PM
You funny :) cheers dear! xomo
Dietrich Avatar
December 20, 2017 at 1:45 PM
OH MY, I can really relate to this one!! WELL DONE
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 20, 2017 at 1:48 PM
Ha! Awesome :) some giggles too! Thank you Andrea! xomo
Pandit Avatar
December 20, 2017 at 1:20 PM
Very clever .. hits the mark!
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December 20, 2017 at 1:39 PM
Thank you Vijay! :) xomo!
Smith Avatar
December 20, 2017 at 12:03 PM
That is the one we should be weary about
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 20, 2017 at 1:35 PM
Giggle, you know it! ...every time you click on one of mine xo!
Godwin Avatar
December 20, 2017 at 12:01 PM
You concentrator, you! Clever line. Good luck in the contest, this is certainly original and, I think, a brain sticker for readers. All the best ... CayCay
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 20, 2017 at 1:37 PM
Giggles :) thank you so much! xo mo!
Smith Avatar
December 20, 2017 at 11:56 AM
This is great Maureen, best wishes...
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December 20, 2017 at 1:36 PM
Thank you Charlie :) xomo!
Y. Avatar
December 20, 2017 at 11:26 AM
Hi Maureen, I really enjoyed your one liner. You managed to say a lot in a few words. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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December 20, 2017 at 1:35 PM
Thank you so much Alexis! :) xomo!
Scars Avatar
December 20, 2017 at 11:23 AM
oh I love it, I sense a deepness to it too. So sweet yet full of depth if you know what I mean. Good luck sweet Maureen! :) -luloo
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December 20, 2017 at 11:25 AM
You know wat I mean :) Thank you Lovely! xomo o o
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