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Life Line

He hears her crying on the other end of the phone but on the inside hes dieing becuas shes home alone suisides the word dancing in her head and now hes silently crying leaning on the edge of his bed he pleads for her not to give in she sais it works but the thoughts come back again how he wishes he could stop the pain the she could se theres nothign to gain but in the end its her choice to make

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/15/2011 10:28:00 AM
I remember when you first wrote this....Very good and sad....
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Date: 10/11/2009 8:34:00 AM
I have read your amazing poetry today and enjoyed it. Thank you Jonathan. I hope you are enjoying your weekend. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/10/2009 1:19:00 PM
If you're writing about someone...hope it works out okay. You have a good poem but sad...Marty
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