Life Line

He hears her crying
on the other end of the phone
but on the inside hes dieing
becuas shes home alone
suisides the word
dancing in her head
and now hes silently crying
leaning on the edge of his bed
he pleads for her
not to give in
she sais it works
but the thoughts come back again
how he wishes he could stop the pain
the she could se
theres nothign to gain
but in the end
its her choice to make
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Spraggs Avatar
November 15, 2011 at 10:28 AM
I remember when you first wrote this....Very good and sad....
Brown Avatar
October 11, 2009 at 8:34 AM
I have read your amazing poetry today and enjoyed it. Thank you Jonathan. I hope you are enjoying your weekend. Love, Carol
Owens Avatar
October 10, 2009 at 1:19 PM
If you're writing about someone...hope it works out okay. You have a good poem but sad...Marty
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