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Life Lapse

Life is full of lapse it is a lurch core.
Yet, be with pals and at aplomb with you.
Love to live let live, yet guilt will occur.
Life is full of lapse it is a lurch core.
Yet if you find clout, you'll stay on the floor.
And will surely appreciate the view.
Life is full of lapse it is a lurch core.
Yet, be with pals and at aplomb with you.

Written: March 13, 2023

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Demetrios Trifiatis March 14, 2023 at 8:33 AM A challenging look at life through knowledge and experience, dearest friend, Lasaad. Be blessed!

Vijay Pandit March 14, 2023 at 5:53 AM I like your view on life my friend. Well done, Lasaad.

Victor Buhagiar March 14, 2023 at 1:57 AM Great triolet.

Yann Rolland March 13, 2023 at 6:37 PM so wise and thoughtful, i think we need friends too, to cross over lapses, dense indeed,excellent penning yann

Fin Chuuk March 13, 2023 at 6:12 PM Ain’t that’s a true story. Great write and a beautiful picture.