Life Kills

What is life but an illusion?
A simple game for you to lose in?
Never advancing or skipping ahead,
the game never ends, even if you are dead.
Tormenting nature, Tormenting lives,
Tormenting Death, cutting like knives.
The Afterlife you think is there
is just Oblivion, dark and bare.
Burning darkness kills your soul,
we always score, but never goal.
For time is Death, and Life is Hell,
an ever ringing ominous knell.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Ehigiator Avatar
January 22, 2009 at 2:24 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week..God Bless *Tyesha
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January 22, 2009 at 11:20 AM
Congrats Syd on "Life Kills" being featured this week. Vince
Jordan Avatar
January 22, 2009 at 9:27 AM
I just wanted to say congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ
Moreno Avatar
January 21, 2009 at 3:29 PM
Nice poem and congratulation on your feature of the week...Raul
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January 21, 2009 at 1:58 PM
Darkness and pain captured in a powerful way. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Keep on writing. Wishing you ongoing success. Karen
Brown Avatar
January 19, 2009 at 11:10 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. May you have many more. Love, Carol
Winter Avatar
January 19, 2009 at 9:06 AM
Such a dark write. Congrats on a well deserved featured poem of the week. Love, Shar
Ingraham Avatar
January 18, 2009 at 4:14 AM
this is good
Brown Avatar
January 13, 2009 at 3:26 PM
Welcome to PoetrySoup. I hope to read more poetry from you. Love, Carol
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January 8, 2009 at 10:27 AM
I read this and there is such a darkness here, Life in itself is Beautiful but in life there is Pain, Heartache, Sorrow, Trials, Tests, Love, Peace, Hope, Joy and so much more, I think it's very important to know God and to draw closer to him now more than ever, You will find that your life will be better indeed, he will bring you so much peace, strength to stand against all life throws at you, just lean on him, I will keep you in my prayers. May God bless and keep you, take care..Tyesha
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