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Life Is Nice

Life is nice 
When god is mine
When god is mine my mom is fine
She makes me shine
My dear is father
Like my mother 
I have my brother in my troubles 
We have each other
I love my friends in any place
Finale the best teacher in every where
So
I found my best with you sir ((my teacher))
Now I think 
I have to say thank you sir 
At last my god who gave me life 
Excuse me god 
I love you god
..........

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Umar Kakamu Aliyu

November 13, 2015 at 6:54 AM

It definitely says, and would stand, and would walk among the living poems, especially the line that says: When god is mine my mom is fine. It's amazing Mohamad Erfan Givehchi.

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 22, 2015 at 3:46 AM

- Hello Mohamad - Autumn is a great time to write and read poems :) - I welcome you to the P - Soup, with your great first poem :) - Hope you will have a nice time here with us - Best wishes and good luck - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

October 16, 2015 at 9:13 PM

Hi Mohamad, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Mohamad Erfan Givehchi

October 20, 2015 at 11:53 AM

Thanks Linda for your kind comment . and you know Iam realy glad that you read my poem ((and if you can please introduce my poems to your friends )). You know in fact you have very beautiful pen dear friend . m.e.givehchi

Skat A

October 16, 2015 at 1:05 PM

Mohamad, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT