Life Is Nice

Life is nice When god is mine When god is mine my mom is fine She makes me shine My dear is father Like my mother I have my brother in my troubles We have each other I love my friends in any place Finale the best teacher in every where So I found my best with you sir ((my teacher)) Now I think I have to say thank you sir At last my god who gave me life Excuse me god I love you god ..........

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Umar Kakamu Aliyu

Date: 11/13/2015 6:54:00 AM

It definitely says, and would stand, and would walk among the living poems, especially the line that says: When god is mine my mom is fine. It's amazing Mohamad Erfan Givehchi.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/22/2015 3:46:00 AM

- Hello Mohamad - Autumn is a great time to write and read poems :) - I welcome you to the P - Soup, with your great first poem :) - Hope you will have a nice time here with us - Best wishes and good luck - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/16/2015 9:13:00 PM

Hi Mohamad, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Mohamad Erfan Givehchi
Date: 10/20/2015 11:53:00 AM

Thanks Linda for your kind comment . and you know Iam realy glad that you read my poem ((and if you can please introduce my poems to your friends )). You know in fact you have very beautiful pen dear friend . m.e.givehchi

Skat A

Date: 10/16/2015 1:05:00 PM

Mohamad, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Pam Deremer

Date: 10/16/2015 12:49:00 PM

I liked your poem.

Mohamad Erfan Givehchi
Date: 10/20/2015 11:57:00 AM

Thanks Pam me too (( I liked your poems )) and if you can please introduce my poems to your friends ... m.e.givehchi