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Life Is Like a Clear Stream

Life is like a clear stream, let it freely flow Let every creature nearby happily grow Let each one sharing caring make it a glow Life is like a clear stream, let it freely flow Let nothing hinders its growth make its flow slow Let no creature, in spirit, ever feel low Life is like a clear stream, let it freely flow Let every creature nearby happily grow 2 July 2021

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 7/4/2021 9:47:00 AM

This is excellent poetry my friend, Kudos, I love your style. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Curie Stark

Date: 7/3/2021 7:04:00 AM

For me life is a water jet through a pipe sometimes can go out of flow but very straight. Great poem though.

Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/3/2021 10:19:00 AM

Thank you very much.

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 7/2/2021 2:21:00 PM

Love this Triolet, Christuraj - beautiful! The form itself is striking, and this line - "Life is like a clear stream, let it freely flow' is profound. Best wishes ~ Mala

Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/3/2021 6:19:00 AM

Thank you very much.