Christuraj Alex Poet Triolet

Life Is Like a Clear Stream

Life is like a clear stream, let it freely flow
Let every creature nearby happily grow
Let each one sharing caring make it a glow
Life is like a clear stream, let it freely flow
Let nothing hinders its growth make its flow slow
Let no creature, in spirit, ever feel low
Life is like a clear stream, let it freely flow
Let every creature nearby happily grow

2 July 2021

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Jennifer Proxenos July 4, 2021 at 9:47 AM This is excellent poetry my friend, Kudos, I love your style. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Curie Stark July 3, 2021 at 7:04 AM For me life is a water jet through a pipe sometimes can go out of flow but very straight. Great poem though. Christuraj Alex July 3, 2021 at 10:19 AM Thank you very much.

Malabika Ray Choudhury July 2, 2021 at 2:21 PM Love this Triolet, Christuraj - beautiful! The form itself is striking, and this line - "Life is like a clear stream, let it freely flow' is profound. Best wishes ~ Mala Christuraj Alex July 3, 2021 at 6:19 AM Thank you very much.