Notes About The Poem

(written in Yalto form)

Life Is Life

Life is life
Not always fair?
You bet
You simply play
With the cards you're dealt
Just live it
Fully
Laugh at it
When it
Knocks you down
Get back up
Keep on keeping on
You only have one life
So
Make it a good one



Date written and posted: 09/27/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
September 27, 2018 at 3:37 PM
Beautiful penned, Edward. A FAVE for me.
Ibeh Avatar
September 27, 2018 at 4:02 PM
Thank you so much, Line!:-)
Krutsinger Avatar
September 27, 2018 at 2:58 PM
"when it knocks you down, get back up," and "make it a good one" - two sage pieces of advice, Edward. I am appreciating and listening.
Ibeh Avatar
September 27, 2018 at 3:24 PM
I'm glad this speaks to you, Caren:-) Thanks for the comments and visit.
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