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LIFE IS HARD

I don’t remember the shower unless the glass shatters into smithereens I slip on the soap of sudsy shards Life is hard the walls press in white and smooth as if a crowd’s haranguing me Life is hard with choices of a cloth or bar to rub over the rough spots I cry when the water’s too hot Life is hard when the faucet’s turned off and the dirt is baked on and my feet stick to one spot over the drain Life is hard Life is easy too when cool water runs over my shoulders cascading calming Life is uplifting too when the tears abate instead lather my hair with suds of laughter Life is a clear day I can see eternity I can see my way out The misty doors open Feet are daisy fresh Life is hard Life is easy too

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Date: 12/5/2023 4:40:00 AM
Kim, I really enjoyed your litany of life's ups and downs! The line " I can see my way put" especially resonates with me. Nothing better! how piece is constructed so interestingly, terrific! Happy Tuesday xxoo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/5/2023 4:50:00 AM
Thank you so much, Mike! My poem started in the shower…lol. :)
Date: 12/5/2023 2:54:00 AM
- Yes, life can offer both difficulties and hard days... we all experience them, Kim - Let your light shine :) - hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/5/2023 4:51:00 AM
Ups and downs…downs and ups…so true! Be blessed, Anne-Lise!
Date: 12/4/2023 8:55:00 PM
Such is life Kim, we have to have both the good and the bad, it certainly makes life more interesting. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/5/2023 4:52:00 AM
It does! We often remember the mishaps and at times can laugh about them. God bless you, Tom!
Date: 12/4/2023 3:51:00 PM
Wasn't there a song by 'Three Dog Night' called 'Easy to be Hard' back in the day? They couldn't write poetry -- or sing, actually. lol.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/4/2023 4:38:00 PM
LOL!
Date: 12/4/2023 3:34:00 PM
I found the dichotomies are so accurate...some days hard and I'm irritated over the seemingly senseless little things. Yet, when I do what you suggested, I can see eternity, the way out...it was all my choice. Outstanding words and wisdom, Kim. Wishing you a splendid evening, Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/4/2023 4:39:00 PM
Thank you, Sara! :)
Date: 12/4/2023 2:51:00 PM
Hard or easy, life is better when shared with friends. Have a great evening, my friend.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/4/2023 4:39:00 PM
So true. Even bad news shared, is not alone
Date: 12/4/2023 1:50:00 PM
Life can be hard..its all about perspective
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/4/2023 4:40:00 PM
True! We have that!
Date: 12/4/2023 1:33:00 PM
This is a real testament to your gift, you know. I thought the contrast to 'life is hard' and 'life is easy too' to be quite brilliant. :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/4/2023 4:40:00 PM
Thank you, Paige! Hugs

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