Kim Merryman Poet Verse

Life Is Good - a Waltz Wave

I've
got a
roof
over
my head and
clothes on
my 
back. I've
got good food
to eat and a
family
to love 
and
who love
me back. God
has blessed
me.
Life is
good.

2/9/13  (See my blog about the Waltz Wave form.)

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Ndaba Sibanda February 15, 2013 at 12:18 AM Yes, we should learn to count our blessings. "Life is good". l like the positive message here!

Isaiah Zerbst February 14, 2013 at 11:43 AM Nice to hear you are blessed, Kim. Live does not have to be easy to be enjoyable, but the little comforts are not good to take for granted or they are soon not enjoyed. Is this a form you came up with?

Jack Horne February 13, 2013 at 8:09 AM indeed, many of us don't always realise how lucky we are- lovely write, Kim

Poet Destroyer A February 12, 2013 at 9:21 PM Kim, i like the way you split the words... made the poem flow, with goodness...PD

Debbie Guzzi February 12, 2013 at 7:19 PM Thanks for reading my writes, I have enjoyed yours this evening. Light & love

Anne-Lise Andresen February 12, 2013 at 10:28 AM Then you have EVERYTHING, Kim - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Betty Bolden February 12, 2013 at 4:08 AM i'm so glad you enjoyed my poem..

Andrea Dietrich February 10, 2013 at 11:19 PM wow ,Kim, I LOVE your wave. it really flows and that is difficult to do with a poem of this form!! glad to see this example tonight.

Debra Squyres February 10, 2013 at 10:36 AM Love the message and you really met the challenge of the syllable count. Have to give it a try...I like the challenge...Will let you know... Enjoyed this !!

Harry Horsman February 10, 2013 at 8:43 AM bloody hell Kim this is positive, and oh so awesome for me to read.. yes i really love this, thank you, guess i needed this,

Joann Grisetti February 9, 2013 at 5:22 PM I am interested in this new form an will try one soon.

The Situation February 9, 2013 at 3:18 PM who can ask for more than that?

David Williams February 9, 2013 at 3:10 PM Hi Kim, yep I know this form from another site I use, not that I have used it myself but one guy there is very good with it, I like your poem...David