life is different now

younger me smelled like suntan spray in summer
now I smell like off deep woods spray, a bummer
wood ticks love me, my parasites of choice
last week we counted ten on my cousin Joyce

it’s strange how life changes as we age
We don’t get wiser, can’t claim to be a sage
but our scents change as our teeth get long
life is different now, not right, not wrong
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Theraven Avatar
November 7, 2025 at 9:01 PM
Hello Caren, Such is life, and change. So different than those Coppertone years. Lord how I miss the fresh washed smell of "Gee, Your Hair Smells Terrific". -Richard
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November 8, 2025 at 6:46 PM
Me too Richard Me Too!
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