Life Is An Illusion

Life is an illusion
born out of desire
and without ending.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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September 27, 2009 at 3:10 PM
Isn't that the truth Gert. Very thought provoking and so true. A great Senryu! My kind of inspiring poetry.....Thanks for your comment on In Tune To Earth. It's controversial for some, still waiting for spit fire....Thanks for your support. Take care Love Light Truth Patricia
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September 23, 2009 at 6:59 AM
life is one whole illusion passing in a trance--excellent--Charma
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September 22, 2009 at 7:03 PM
Gert, this is an amazing write, nice work...Raul
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September 22, 2009 at 6:45 PM
Yes, Gert, I believe life is a never ending journey. Desire comes in each lifetime, but it is reaching the end that provides the reward. Excellent senryu! Love, Carolyn
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September 22, 2009 at 4:41 PM
sweet write Gert. this circle of life just keeps on churning.
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September 22, 2009 at 4:27 PM
Great idea here. Keep writing. Sara
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