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Life is a song


Life it beats all the time
Inside of our heart 
Finding the best to succeed~
Existing and progressing keep our life going.
Isolated we are trying to get friends.
Sourprise if you get one.
Above your expectatives, you'll find you 
Simplicity drives you to whatever you want to be.
Open windows get the sun into another
Nest to lay your eggs~ 
Great singers for new generations
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Bowring Avatar
January 12, 2024 at 11:48 PM
My dear sweet Maria, what a joy your poem is to read accompanied by the lovely, sweet picture. It’s so uplifting and upbeat- just what we all need as we embrace a new year ahead. I love the lines especially with -‘ simplicity drives you to want you want to be and opening the windows ‘. Very inspiring! It’s put a song in my heart to start the day! So hope you’ve had a great start to the year. Bigs hugs and blessings my sweet, lovely friend xx
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
January 13, 2024 at 1:02 AM
Good morning Christina. What a nice awakening with your lovely comment!. Thank you so much for stopping by. I also hope you had a good starting this new year. Here It's very cold, white frosty mornings, but it's winter time. Thanks my friend. Have a wonderful weekendxxxHugs
Buhagiar Avatar
January 10, 2024 at 1:11 AM
Such a melodious poem. You did very well. Well done.
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
January 10, 2024 at 1:39 AM
Thank you very much Victor. Blessings!
Andresen Avatar
January 7, 2024 at 1:20 PM
- A lovely poem, Maria ... #Open windows get the sun into another" ... a new year and we should all open our windows :) - Best wishes to you in the new year, my friend :) - hugs
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
January 7, 2024 at 2:14 PM
Thanks a lot Anne. My best wishes to you too for this New Year. Have a good night. Hugs
Buehler Avatar
January 7, 2024 at 1:01 PM
Maria, this beautiful poem puts a song in my heart. Also, the picture is very cute! :)
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
January 7, 2024 at 2:16 PM
Good evening Evelyn. Thank you so much for stopping by and for your lovely comment. Have a good Sunday. Blessings!
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 6, 2024 at 11:12 AM
Hello Maria, this beautifully done. My fav. Love, /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 7, 2024 at 7:35 AM
Hello Maria, It snowed last night. Yes thank you. Your welcome. Love, /Darlene
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
January 7, 2024 at 12:40 AM
Good morning Darlene. Thank you so much. I hope you are well. Thanks for the Fav too. Love/María
Rodgers Avatar
January 5, 2024 at 5:19 PM
Maria, Your acrostic poem is a beautiful and inspiring piece that celebrates the joys of life. The imagery and metaphors you use are vivid and powerful. - Blessings, Daniel
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
January 5, 2024 at 5:49 PM
My blessings to you, my dear. I aporeciate every second and word you have written. Blessings to you!
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