Life Is a Jet Plane I Wear Shoes

The difference between life,
            and my life is 
            velocity :
            Life is a jet plane...
           and i walk in life
            with shoes...!!!
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August 14, 2021 at 11:51 AM
Hello Alaka, this is an interesting title for your poetry. I like the way you compare life with a plane and shoes. Salute Darlene.
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August 15, 2021 at 10:40 AM
Hello Alaka, Thank you Alaka. Salute Darlene.
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August 15, 2021 at 2:21 AM
Thank you, Very Clever ! salute, alkas
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