Life Is a Bird

This life is a bird and we are it's feathers  
This bird becomes strong and withstands all  weather 
It's wings expand wider when we  stick together 
Then this bird we call life takes us much further
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Debrosse Avatar
July 20, 2012 at 7:00 PM
I really like how you envision this Carmen. I want to see you write more on this topic!
Castro Avatar
July 21, 2012 at 2:36 AM
These lines belonged to another poem I wrote... It just didn't fit changed the lines on the other poem and figured these few lines could stand on there own : )
Andresen Avatar
June 28, 2012 at 2:13 AM
Lovely composed Carmen, like it a lot. - oxox Anne-Lise
Yamin Avatar
June 27, 2012 at 5:30 PM
An enchanting write, Carmen. A beautiful description of life. -Mohammad
Castro Avatar
June 27, 2012 at 10:30 PM
Glad you liked it Mohammed : )
Henderson Avatar
June 27, 2012 at 3:53 PM
Together we stand...and divided we fall. Peace and blessings to you Carmen.
Castro Avatar
June 27, 2012 at 10:30 PM
Likewise Steven
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