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Life Is a Beach

‘Life is a beach and sometimes you fry’ Sun-crested waves meander towards castles in sand from our high hopes of flow teasing our scorched driftwood channelling waters caressing high tides and low sun burn riptides and undertow rally trust in the life guards’ experience of sinking request a hatful of hope and emotion a sunscreen of love and reorganised thinking 4th September 2016

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Jannie Breedt

Date: 9/10/2016 6:35:00 AM

I do enjoy your work. The metaphors are crazy man

Bl Devnath

Date: 9/9/2016 8:51:00 AM

Beautifully drawn a picture of life under the beach. Nice job my friend. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 9/10/2016 4:19:00 AM

Thank you for that Cloudy Poet.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/4/2016 12:36:00 PM

I really enjoyed your innovative approach to a standard quote. Great job. I love life as a beach!

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 9/5/2016 4:06:00 AM

Thank you Andrea. I will have to learn to write short stuff, so I appreciate your comment very much. Many wishes, Kai

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 9/4/2016 6:50:00 AM

Thank you Connie. Some of my friends tell me to keep it simple, and at times I listen...

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/4/2016 4:42:00 AM

Well done Kai. Best of luck in the contest. ; )

John Fleming

Date: 9/4/2016 3:56:00 AM

Love the way this ebbs and flows, Kai...Just like your "Sun-crested waves" - Beautifully penned! My very best regards. :) john

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 9/4/2016 6:55:00 AM

Thank you. Three of my kids work as life guards on the Pembrokeshire beaches and I want their lives to flow...