Kai Michael Neumann Poet Verse

Life Is a Beach

‘Life is a beach and sometimes you fry’

Sun-crested waves meander towards castles in sand from our high hopes of flow
teasing our scorched driftwood channelling waters caressing high tides and low
sun burn riptides and undertow rally trust in the life guards’ experience of sinking
request a hatful of hope and emotion a sunscreen of love and reorganised thinking

4th September 2016

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Jannie Breedt September 10, 2016 at 6:35 AM I do enjoy your work. The metaphors are crazy man

Bl Devnath September 9, 2016 at 8:51 AM Beautifully drawn a picture of life under the beach. Nice job my friend. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl Kai Michael Neumann September 10, 2016 at 4:19 AM Thank you for that Cloudy Poet.

Andrea Dietrich September 4, 2016 at 12:36 PM I really enjoyed your innovative approach to a standard quote. Great job. I love life as a beach! Kai Michael Neumann September 5, 2016 at 4:06 AM Thank you Andrea. I will have to learn to write short stuff, so I appreciate your comment very much. Many wishes, Kai

Kai Michael Neumann September 4, 2016 at 6:50 AM Thank you Connie. Some of my friends tell me to keep it simple, and at times I listen...

Connie Marcum Wong September 4, 2016 at 4:42 AM Well done Kai. Best of luck in the contest. ; )

John Fleming September 4, 2016 at 3:56 AM Love the way this ebbs and flows, Kai...Just like your "Sun-crested waves" - Beautifully penned! My very best regards. :) john Kai Michael Neumann September 4, 2016 at 6:55 AM Thank you. Three of my kids work as life guards on the Pembrokeshire beaches and I want their lives to flow...