Life In the Sky

life in the sky;
	no flies but clouds
	i like the claws of eagles 
	storms and thunders threatening the lives
	bouncing hearts, pounding our souls
	coloured more coloured in ridiculous and bright colours
	life is worth in the sky, valued by the tops.

	loved silent, as the owner of the coffin
	silent of the few, networked and connected in thin pin
	by one sound only the golden
	make the travel of the clouds and soften
	all ways to met with the feathers given
	from their beauty, cute smile beat our troubles then
	we tear our happy cries in farms, green farms
	life is worth in the sky, valued by the tops.

	i like to be seen, visionary in the mind
	as i shine with the sun, aimed to the third
	for its reaction, not my skin's colour identified
	i help the dying sun, i live with the lived
	i will nake all the ideas, as stars to the naked eyes
	showing, helping to touch; the smoothen of the sky
	as the deaf values by touch, life in the sky; valued by tops.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 10/25/2017 2:13:00 PM
Excellent.. could literary imagine the life in the sky. ????
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Abed Anthony
Date: 10/26/2017 1:57:00 PM
I appreciate your acceptance... 'Nothing to handle the intangible but imagery'
Date: 2/21/2017 11:39:00 PM
Excellent, Abed! Wide-ranging and fascinating. : )
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Abed Anthony
Date: 2/22/2017 11:53:00 PM
It is my pleasure to hear from you (Doug Vinson), it is the wish of the will. I do appreciate it.
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