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Life In Merry

Merry, merry, merry Married to my body Body became healthy Healthy I'm wealthy Body in a leisure Leisure gets better Body in pleasure Pleasure I will treasure Merry, merry, merry My mind in merry Mind became peaceful Peaceful I'm hopeful Mind starts to enjoy Enjoy and it enjoy Mind became joyful Joyful I'm playful Merry, merry, merry Moving my emotions Love starts to blossom Blossom it was awesome Emotions to devotion Devotion gets better Compassion in action Flowing and growing Merry, merry, merry Life is in merry Life became blissful Blissful I'm wishful Life and its destiny Dancing on ecstasy Merry, merry, merry Merry without worry Honorable Mention in STRAND CHOICE 7,any form,any theme Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand

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Brenda Chiri

Date: 1/27/2020 2:55:00 PM

Congrats on your honorable mention!;)

Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/27/2020 9:19:00 PM

Thank you Brenda..

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/27/2020 11:51:00 AM

I love it that you used "merry" without adding Christmas. People rarely remember that it is a word on its own. You have done her justice!

Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/27/2020 12:25:00 PM

Lol..merry christmas..Thank you Caren..

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/26/2020 8:51:00 PM

Right! Don't worry; be happy!...Write! Smiles, Gershon

Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/26/2020 9:14:00 PM

Don't worry.. Be happy.. Merry in body, mind, emotions and life energies.. Life becomes simple and blissful..Have great day my friend...

Sandra Adams

Date: 1/26/2020 3:02:00 PM

the repeat of merry pulls the reader along so nicely...i enjoyed this, it has a witty, playful feel to it... good write Jenish :) hugs

Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/26/2020 9:11:00 PM

Thank you Sandra for your time and wonderful comment..

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/26/2020 7:17:00 AM

Reads and flows like a song--bursting in happy emotions--a bouncy, pleasant read, Jenish.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/26/2020 7:36:00 AM

merriness married to body blossoms health.... And when it relish pleasure will arise.... likewise.. At first I was planning to write it in free verse.. Then it starts to rhyme and this silly one born.. Thank you for you kind words and inspiration..

Silent One

Date: 1/26/2020 5:48:00 AM

great spirit... uplifting poem..

Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/26/2020 6:34:00 AM

Thank you Silent One..

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/26/2020 4:18:00 AM

How a delightful and uplifting poem dearest, Jenish. It certainly makes one feel merry! Hugs xxx

Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/26/2020 4:21:00 AM

Thank you Demetrios for your kind words..