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Life In Limbo

Color fades by daybreak welcoming the dawn euphoric daydreams to ponder on translucent is the sunset bearing life to city streams carved into the pavement allured it's parting gleams secured inside its natal womb humility will serve breaking the monotony the stairway starts to swerve with ever elusive passages dwelling deep inside grounds depth mystery awakening darkness upon capricious breadth

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Date: 10/2/2020 11:30:00 PM
Wonderful write. Brings out so much imagery. ~~
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 10/3/2020 2:23:00 PM
Thank you, Victor :)
Date: 10/2/2020 7:46:00 PM
the stairway starts to swerve/ with ever elusive passages/ dwelling deep inside grounds depth...a mystery indeed!
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 10/3/2020 2:24:00 PM
Thank you, Kim :)
Date: 10/2/2020 2:24:00 PM
Wonderful imagery you created in this splendid write, Angela.
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 10/2/2020 5:35:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay. You're a wonderful writer and I really appreciate your comments. :) Peace, Angie

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