Life Desiccates You

Life desiccates you My heart melts in your desert Drink my oasis. September 1, 2017.

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Moon Flower

Date: 9/4/2017 7:02:00 AM

Congratulations, Sublimal!

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 9/5/2017 12:14:00 AM

Thank you, Moon Flower.

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/3/2017 12:09:00 PM

Congratulations Subimal :)

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 9/3/2017 11:10:00 PM

Thank you, Heidi.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/3/2017 11:44:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great third place in the contest, Subimal - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 9/3/2017 11:11:00 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/1/2017 5:12:00 PM

wow, this is super cool senryu, Subimal. My eyes are so bad, at first I thought you were "subliminal!"

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 9/1/2017 10:59:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea. No, I am not, I am on the ground visible.