Life Desiccates You

Life desiccates you
My heart melts in your desert
Drink my oasis.

September 1, 2017.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Flower Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 7:02 AM
Congratulations, Sublimal!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 12:14 AM
Thank you, Moon Flower.
Sands Avatar
September 3, 2017 at 12:09 PM
Congratulations Subimal :)
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 3, 2017 at 11:10 PM
Thank you, Heidi.
Andresen Avatar
September 3, 2017 at 11:44 AM
- Congratulations on your great third place in the contest, Subimal - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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September 3, 2017 at 11:11 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise.
Dietrich Avatar
September 1, 2017 at 5:12 PM
wow, this is super cool senryu, Subimal. My eyes are so bad, at first I thought you were "subliminal!"
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 1, 2017 at 10:59 PM
Thank you, Andrea. No, I am not, I am on the ground visible.
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