Life Cycle

Early morning I have to wake up and catch the train.
Distance long and crowd among, early start the only way
Mortgaged soul, lend heart and invested brain 
 
Up to this journey what I've lost and what is gain
Calculated not what I posses and what to pay
Mortgaged soul, lend heart and invested brain  

Daily spin the words, infertile ideas I toil to explain
They call me *babu, office assistant you better say
Early morning I have to wake up and catch the train.

Contrary policies and balance to maintain
Malice, greed, pride sharp word spikes and I’m the prey
Mortgaged soul, lend heart and invested brain  

You know the story of rabbit visiting lion’s den
Heap of bones, going in foot prints no signs out way 
Early morning I have to wake up and catch the train.

Call it cycle of life or the destruction chain
Earning sources, Means of livelihood taking lives away 
Early morning I have to wake up and catch the train.
Mortgaged soul, lend heart and invested brain  


First time exprimenting with Villanelle  poetic form. comments are welcome!
babu is a common word for  office clerk   in India
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Lamoureux Avatar
April 9, 2014 at 5:57 PM
This is very good Neelam, I like when you write longer forms, it gives me more shades with which to enjoy your thinking.
Sangwai Avatar
April 10, 2014 at 10:18 PM
I 'll try for longer forms. Hearty Thanks and Regards!
Thirtyseven Avatar
April 9, 2014 at 6:46 AM
Sorry I'm no expert on villanelle, but this sounds right. I fully agree with the sentiment. Well done.
Sangwai Avatar
April 10, 2014 at 10:17 PM
Hearty Thanks !
Berdoo Avatar
March 29, 2014 at 5:15 AM
Neelman, you sly woman, I read this beautiful poem, you wrote from your heart. You know it, I know it, and everybody after, will agree. Keep writing, I'll be back.
Sangwai Avatar
April 10, 2014 at 10:17 PM
Hearty Thanks!
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