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Life Cycle

Time moves on There is change Better or worse Just never the same Our hearts adjust Our souls accept Our spirit copes Our memory never forgets

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Mike Gentile

Date: 8/19/2023 6:17:00 AM

Deb, I am so impressed at how in just a few short lines, you have expressed so much in a poetically beautiful way! Happy Saturday xxoo

Deb M
Date: 8/19/2023 11:10:00 PM

Thankyou Mike for such a nice comment! Debx

Shirley Hawkins

Date: 8/18/2023 7:39:00 PM

A very well-expressed poem, Deb XX

Deb M
Date: 8/19/2023 11:08:00 PM

Thankyou my lovely friend Shirley! Debx

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 8/18/2023 7:45:00 AM

Short but powerful, Deb. I liked it rather well. It's all about moving on, forgiving and forgetting. Have a great day, Sara Etgen-Baker

Deb M
Date: 8/18/2023 1:45:00 PM

Hi Sara…..it was actually about life ,loss ,coping, moving forward and remembering the good times….but thats the beauty of poetry….we all interrupt poems differently. Thanks Sara…..Debx

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 8/17/2023 6:12:00 PM

The older I get, the less I like change. But as you say, it is inevitable.

Deb M
Date: 8/17/2023 7:14:00 PM

Thanks Jerry….Debx

Bill Baker

Date: 8/17/2023 5:43:00 PM

Well said, my Aussie friend. An enjoyable poem for us today. Thanks for sharing, Deb. Hugs, Bill

Deb M
Date: 8/17/2023 7:14:00 PM

Cheers my Texan Budster!! Ha….Debx