Life Changing Events

I recall when my father died
The weeping willows cried
Sunflowers hid their face
Morning birds sang "Amazing Grace
That night the moon was blue
He sobbed a heavy dew
Frogs and crickets, respectfully silent
While his world mourned in private

He had been a steward of the land
Turning the soil by hand
Fished and hunted wild game
Taught his sons to do the same
Only taking his need for his family fill
Thinking it wrong to wastefully kill
Now resting in an earthly tomb
At peace in Mother Nature's womb

Consoling my heartbroken mother
Fifty years with only one lover
Drowning in her ocean of tears
Facing lonely golden years
As we followed my father's hearse
I thought, "What could be worse?"
Within a year I got my answer
My only brother died of cancer

He was born on Lincoln's birthday
In his shadow is where I stayed
Like a pup, following him everywhere
Bidding his wishes, fulfilling his dares
Before I was legal, he taught me to drive
We fought all challengers for family pride
At his wedding I was his best man
We were each others' biggest fan

To the world these two events
Held little significance
But forever my life was changed
In the midst of insufferable pain
It's been over twenty years
All alone I've faced my fears
Now they visit from worlds apart
In my dreams consoling my heart



  an original poem by the "poemdog" Daniel Turner

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 7/8/2016 8:05:00 AM
A very nice write and tribute to family love. Really enjoyed the read!
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Daniel Turner
Date: 7/8/2016 10:59:00 AM
Thank you Ingrid. I appreciate your kindness.
Date: 6/30/2016 8:05:00 AM
Beautiful tribute to one so dear to your heart Daniel
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Daniel Turner
Date: 6/30/2016 1:12:00 PM
Thank you Kelli. I appreciate it and am always happy to hear from you.
Date: 6/26/2016 5:05:00 PM
Such a beautiful write! It is hard losing someone that significant in your life. I know from experience. The grief never really goes away it just it softens with time. Many Blessings to you! :)
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Date: 6/27/2016 6:30:00 AM
Thank you, Christine. Yes you are right. Sometimes the feeling of loss will hit you out of nowhere. I appreciate your kind comments and your friendly visits.
Date: 6/26/2016 4:33:00 PM
- A deeply moving poem, Daniel - Great written - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/27/2016 6:28:00 AM
Thank you A-L. I value your comments and your support.
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