Life Boat

I drift
In a sea of
Responsibilities
Desperately seeking my ship of
Lost dreams.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Ashford Avatar
September 12, 2019 at 9:46 AM
Cool write. I get the implied frustration.
Ashford Avatar
July 25, 2019 at 8:24 AM
Says much with few words Rachel. Sweet write.
Zerbst Avatar
April 20, 2013 at 6:44 PM
Very nice poem here. I like that you chose an unfrequently used form. At least I have not seen many of them. Check out the Wool-Puller's blog if you have time.
Jones Avatar
April 20, 2013 at 8:16 AM
Congratulations Rachel.....
Guzzi Avatar
April 19, 2013 at 6:28 PM
Congrad's on Your Win. Light & Love
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April 19, 2013 at 10:18 AM
Rachel, Congratulations :-) with your awesome win in Isaiah's "Pull the Wool Over My Eyes!" contest :-) LINDA < :
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