Life Boat

I drift In a sea of Responsibilities Desperately seeking my ship of Lost dreams.

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Eric Ashford

Date: 9/12/2019 9:46:00 AM

Cool write. I get the implied frustration.

Eric Ashford

Date: 7/25/2019 8:24:00 AM

Says much with few words Rachel. Sweet write.

Isaiah Zerbst

Date: 4/20/2013 6:44:00 PM

Very nice poem here. I like that you chose an unfrequently used form. At least I have not seen many of them. Check out the Wool-Puller's blog if you have time.

Donna Jones

Date: 4/20/2013 8:16:00 AM

Congratulations Rachel.....

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/19/2013 6:28:00 PM

Congrad's on Your Win. Light & Love

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/19/2013 10:18:00 AM

Rachel, Congratulations :-) with your awesome win in Isaiah's "Pull the Wool Over My Eyes!" contest :-) LINDA < :