Life Blossoms
Bill you took a few simply words and turned them into a very nice poem keep up the great work Bear
here's the one line for you to try and do something with. when the first flowers of spring bloom i close my eyes and smile to myself
LIFE BLOSSOMS
Life anew for me and you comes on the breath of flowers in spring.
All blooms and fills the empty rooms of winter with voices that sing.
I hear the songs of life, close my eyes, smile to myself at the wonders of birth -
at all that most believed dead ( it's all in our head ) upon this earth.
Life is a constant journey - a marry go round / roller coaster ride of renewal -
death is but a train station one waits at in order to refuel
for another adventure within this plain - most fear death ( it's cruel ) -
and so live out their lives in pain - think life is but a great big stool
and that is nothing you would want to sit on and contemplate
the directions of your life's journey and what may be your fate
as you take all the journeys towards a clean slate.
B. J. "A"
April 9th 2009
I am sorry Bear, thought that I would have this off to you when I finished it but my computer - or is it the pirated signal - had other ideas . Thursday April 9th at 8:00 pm should have been the ETA for you to have received this . Anyway my friend I hope that this rhyme meets your approval . No noose about this poems authors neck . Bill
Copyright © William J. Jr. Atfield | Year Posted 2012
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