Life Black and White 4x4 Contest

Life   Black and White



Life closed lost color twinkling stars
Interstate paint scrape broken clustered cars
Four men painted on a bright canvas
Eternally voided life in empty blackness

Remembering everything on turned bright light
Discolored eye right hooked bar fight
Pass the wedding dress this ones just right
Cloak and Dagger clandestine midnight

Hot fire torched tipped flame ignite
Swimming microscoped magnified parasite
Rapped Holy Head freedom fighter Shi'ite
Dark hooded beheaded killer of spite

Two most commonly bought color cars
One turned to dust the other started to rust
Water is a must thirsty men eye with lust
Life closed lost color twinkling stars
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Gentry Avatar
February 12, 2016 at 6:57 AM
Congratulations on HM in this challenging contest! Interesting expression of Black and White theme.
A   Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 10:38 PM
Hi Brian, CONGRATS, on your "pairing master rhyme, winning poem. **LINDA**
Davey Avatar
February 12, 2016 at 2:57 AM
thank you I kinda screwed up but I think I did well for my first contest ever. I just entered the Robin Hood contest and I would be honored if you'd let me know what you really think about it. Have a good night sweetheart
A. Sharma Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 9:31 PM
Very lovely.. congrats on ur great win with this awesome write Brian.
Davey Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 10:14 PM
Thank you very much I.appreciate it
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