Life Before You

One right after the other,
it seems to never end.
Problem after problem,
overwhelms me in the end.
These thoughts race faster and 
faster.
How I wish it would end.
The thoughts of suiscied dance in 
my head.
Not knowing what to say or do, 
wishing I knew.
Then I found you!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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July 26, 2012 at 4:39 PM
Lovely thoughts of yours here Tina..though life has its ups and downs...Thx for sharing..keep writing!!
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July 26, 2012 at 12:41 PM
Tina a warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol 07/26/2012
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July 26, 2012 at 11:09 AM
Welcome to P-Soup Tina, hope you will have a lot of fun with poetry. - You write very well, like this poem. Good work. - oxox love from Anne-Lise
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