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Life Battles

Frigid winds approach, Determined leaf flaps in gloom: Grasped to branch of life.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/12/2013 10:54:00 PM

Yes, a good metaphor of life's battles.

Raul Moreno
Date: 9/13/2013 4:21:00 PM

Yes, it has double meaning, we can learn so much from nature.

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/12/2013 5:15:00 PM

As do we all ! Nature and man cling to life ..... we will never win, but we are fighters!

Raul Moreno
Date: 9/13/2013 4:22:00 PM

Indeed, we all have tenacious tendencies when the time comes.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/10/2013 9:12:00 PM

:-0.. Love the haiku...Linda

Raul Moreno
Date: 9/11/2013 6:15:00 PM

Thank you

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/10/2013 8:02:00 AM

I can recognize your haiku in a million lives Raul..Its always glad to see you back Raul

Raul Moreno
Date: 9/11/2013 6:15:00 PM

Thanks for stopping by.