Life and Death of the Sun

In the eastern sky
Morning gives birth to the sun
Dying in the west
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Taylor Avatar
July 13, 2010 at 4:46 PM
Great write, Pal. Ralph
Roberts Avatar
July 13, 2010 at 9:58 AM
nicely put, lovely haiku
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