Life After Love

She Lonely Feels accursed Abandoned by love Now

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/14/2021 12:16:00 PM

Not much worse can happen to (some) women, I imagine. It seems this way from my (limited) experience, anyway. (Only been married twice so far; lol). ~ gw

L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/14/2021 1:54:00 PM

Same here, Gershon, but the last one was so successful and so wonderful I won't be doing so again. I always enjoy your remarks.

Marcela Proust

Date: 3/13/2021 4:01:00 AM

Sad but good poem. I like that "she" and "lonely are isolated words; and later on "now"; indicating her isolation, and the now seems to last forever. Thank you.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/13/2021 9:06:00 AM

Thanks. I appreciated your comments, and you are right on target. Much can be read into this small piece of work.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 3/12/2021 8:57:00 PM

"Abandoned by love" Such a lonely feeling indeed. Your thoughts caress gently around me and my heart. This is tender and emotional, all at the same time. ~ Brandy

L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/12/2021 9:46:00 PM

Thanks so much, Brandy. Just a small poem expressing the feeling of loneliness after loss. Glad you stopped by!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/12/2021 12:45:00 PM

Very sad indeed!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/12/2021 1:06:00 PM

Thanks for reading my attempt at a Lanterne, Kim. I appreciate it.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/11/2021 11:04:00 PM

Ah, so sad and heartfelt!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/12/2021 9:55:00 AM

Thanks, Caren. I appreciate your read.