Life After Death

Reborn revamped
The cold the lamps
The ice, the mist, 
My life has dismissed

New born, new Life
The shade, the light
My life has passed into the dark
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Chu Avatar
July 2, 2009 at 3:45 PM
If I'm reading this right. You're reborn; a new psyche. It's the breath of a new life, as you leave your old one behind. This poem isn't dark; it's about new beginnings. Psyche is also a greek goddess who started out mortal and became a god through some crazy twist of fate. Love the poem. I am reborn almost daily.
Orozco Avatar
June 8, 2009 at 9:37 AM
Wow this is dark. And yet so full of meaning! Good job, amazing write!
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