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Life According To Balveen

If you look at life it is an entanglement of garter snakes Heaps piled together without realising where to start All of a sudden a head peeps and slithers out smoothly Problems of life are magnanimously overbearing The thought of untying the knots can blister the veins But when you slowly open one knot at a time, It is unbelievably so smooth that you need to Flatten that silly, over imaginary bulging head With a piping hot frying pan! Make use of your brain-box! Problems and failures are man's best enemies Failures can wreck our lives and drown us But when the toughest person gives his rough hand, grab it! Don't be wary and judgemental whether to hold or not Rely on your instincts, they're always dependable When two discuss the same failure together and analyse it Blaming not on destiny but on minute flaws of the self Give the broadest smile to work on your new improvisations Your constructive journey has just begun! A new approach! The ruthless plans of destiny are not in your hands But the choices you make are in your hands! Choose well! FIRST October 29, 2015 Contest: Life According to Balveen Sponsor: Silent One

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Date: 11/3/2015 9:58:00 PM
Congrats Balveen on your win I love most the last two lines Best Wishes Anisha D
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/4/2015 6:06:00 AM
Thanks Anisha!
Date: 11/3/2015 5:07:00 PM
Loved your "life according to Balveen!" Congrats on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 11/4/2015 6:05:00 AM
Thanks Sandra dear! Balveen
Date: 11/3/2015 12:48:00 PM
Balveen, Congrats on your win. SKAT
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/4/2015 6:04:00 AM
Thanks Skat! Balveen
Date: 11/3/2015 8:37:00 AM
and the content is "choose well". :) love and peace
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/3/2015 10:59:00 AM
Remnants, thanks for your visit! Balveen

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