Life

Just Impartial reasonable Judging mediating adjudicating Life is never more than nearly fair Closing approaching reaching Hardly scarcely Just

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Bartholomew Williams

Date: 5/26/2017 8:35:00 AM

Hi, Mark. This is a very interesting diamante. (Having just written a couple, they are not as easy to write as I initially thought.) Actually, I read several of your pieces just now (including "2017 - Big Brother watches from on high" - congrats on that trophy!), but I was looking for one with no comments (took a while!) and just had to read what you titled "Life." You've written some high-quality poetry, so I commend you. Have a great Memorial Day weekend! :) See you around Soup.

Mark Martin
Date: 5/26/2017 2:08:00 PM

Thanks Bartholomew for taking the time to look at my poetry and for the kind feedback. Glad you enjoyed them. All the best! Mark :-)