Life

Feel warmth and comfort in such close surrounds of this liquefied place,
Yet there is movement of late, like a small tremor or a quake.
The soft walls of my room start to quiver and shake as I'm moved,
forcing me from familiar environs as downwards I am wooed.

The life giving pulse quickens its pace, somehow I know that it is time,
to leave my nurturing home and a new dwelling to find.
My body makes changes for the new journey that I make,
The womb drains away like a plug pulled from a lake.

The canal is so small, feel restricted and confined,
I wriggle and squirm, every movement clearly defined.
The protective fluid in my lungs begin to drain and dry up,
life giving air from the placenta I can no longer suck.

At the end of the tunnel I feel a cooling on my head,
As downwards I'm forced, am I alive or am I dead?
A sudden explosion of lights and sounds bombard my whole being,
as the tunnel is breached and I am hearing and seeing.

The enormous pressure on my body make me cry out with shock,
I am free now, I gaze around me and take stock.
Such an incredible journey, yet I feel it has just begun.
I am drained now, I curl up on my mum and suck on my thumb.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Lamoureux Avatar
January 25, 2016 at 9:18 AM
You have skills my friend.
Emu Avatar
January 25, 2016 at 12:41 PM
Thanks Richard, I think I have a fair way to go. Good of you to visit. Cheers, Craig
Schmidt  Avatar
January 24, 2016 at 1:39 PM
Beautiful, such vivid description
Bickerstaffe Avatar
January 14, 2016 at 12:54 PM
Magnificent Craig... '...I curl up on my mum and suck on my thumb,' I gotta say I didn't see that coming! Powerful phrasing and electrifying imagery. BRAVO!! Best wishes, Keith
Emu Avatar
January 15, 2016 at 11:06 AM
Thanks Keith, A grand journey it must be.
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