Life

LIFE Life is just a journey Yet it differs from the others; Once begun You can’t turn back To start anew. You only need straightening out The things you have messed up. So we should be careful With it For we’ll never have A new beginning Until we reach the end.

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Saba Sarfraz Khan

Date: 10/20/2016 6:05:00 AM

Well composed. We won't have a new beginning unless we reach the end. Thumb's up.

David Smith

Date: 6/28/2016 7:20:00 AM

There is great truth in this and insight and hope. Just the right amount of words. Well written from David in NZ.

Stacey Brown

Date: 2/10/2016 8:04:00 PM

Makes one think about things for sure. This is a very good write, thanks for sharing my friend. Blessings, Stacey

Milton Robertson

Date: 6/27/2015 6:15:00 AM

Good One. But, straightening out can be easier said than done. I had to call for help. Divine Help.

Skat A

Date: 6/26/2015 3:19:00 PM

Redempta, this is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Redempta Asifiwe
Date: 6/27/2015 6:11:00 AM

Thank you Linda! Glad to have you as a Poet Friend. We'll stay in touch.

Redempta Asifiwe
Date: 6/27/2015 6:07:00 AM

Hello! Thanks for your warm welcome. I'm 17, and currently studying at Kepler University, Rwanda. I did languages and literature at my high school. I live with my parents and two younger sisters and I've always dreamed of having some writings. Poems and songs are the most enjoyed part of my creativity. Anyway, I'll be glad to have you guys give a feedback and tell me what I have to improve. Peace, Skat!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/26/2015 2:50:00 PM

Redempta, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@