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Life

LIFE

Life is just a journey
Yet it differs from the others;
Once begun
You can’t turn back
To start anew.
You only need straightening out 
The things you have messed up.


So we should be careful
With it
For we’ll never have 
A new beginning
Until we reach the end.

Copyright © Redempta Asifiwe | Year Posted 2015

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Saba Sarfraz Khan Date: 10/20/2016 6:05:00 AM Well composed. We won't have a new beginning unless we reach the end. Thumb's up. Login to Reply

David Smith Date: 6/28/2016 7:20:00 AM There is great truth in this and insight and hope. Just the right amount of words. Well written from David in NZ. Login to Reply

Stacey Brown Date: 2/10/2016 8:04:00 PM Makes one think about things for sure. This is a very good write, thanks for sharing my friend. Blessings, Stacey Login to Reply

Milton Robertson Date: 6/27/2015 6:15:00 AM Good One. But, straightening out can be easier said than done. I had to call for help. Divine Help. Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 6/26/2015 3:19:00 PM Redempta, this is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT Login to Reply Redempta Asifiwe Date: 6/27/2015 6:11:00 AM Thank you Linda! Glad to have you as a Poet Friend. We'll stay in touch. Redempta Asifiwe Date: 6/27/2015 6:07:00 AM Hello! Thanks for your warm welcome. I'm 17, and currently studying at Kepler University, Rwanda. I did languages and literature at my high school. I live with my parents and two younger sisters and I've always dreamed of having some writings. Poems and songs are the most enjoyed part of my creativity. Anyway, I'll be glad to have you guys give a feedback and tell me what I have to improve. Peace, Skat!

Poet Destroyer A Date: 6/26/2015 2:50:00 PM Redempta, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@ Login to Reply