Life

Peaceful presence surrounds nature
In the cool quiet morn
Wispy clouds fan brushed decorate
A canvas newly born

Orange marmalade sunlight glows
Through silhouetted pines
Casting lavender upon clouds
Making their glory shine

The constant hum of crickets bright
And roosters' noisy den
Gives a pleasant orchestra ring
To a great concert blend

The death angel visited a scene
He carried one away
Now we all know that Ebola
Can come here to stay

Our future is more uncertain
Will the dread disease spread
Who will be touched next in America
Where has safety now fled  
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Devnath  Avatar
October 20, 2014 at 11:40 AM
Future is uncertain, God only knows. Deep imagery,my sweet friend. Loved always,bl
Cayton Avatar
October 17, 2014 at 10:00 AM
Trust in the Lord. Love the Imagery Sara.
Deschler Avatar
October 17, 2014 at 2:06 AM
The angel of death's arrival certainly does disrupt the peace and tranquility of our everyday lives. It is troubling to not know where it will appear next.... I did not expect that twist in the story, but it works to great effect. Well done, Sara!
Andresen Avatar
October 16, 2014 at 5:56 AM
- Your words about life, warms my heart Sara - Beautiful! - We know nothing about the tomorrow... - Have a lovely day :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Loving Iii Avatar
October 15, 2014 at 4:58 PM
we were warned that such thing would come in the end times. you really flipped the script with the last two stanza's. what brought that on? trying to make time for the soup job in the day and a lady friend at night makes it difficult. miss you john.
Horne Avatar
October 15, 2014 at 1:42 PM
oh, yes, very true to life, my friend - have posted our co write; thanks for writing with me x
A. Sharma Avatar
October 15, 2014 at 4:11 AM
Such a lovely write on life Barbara i loved to read!Uncertainty prevails everywhere my friend!
Mcdaid Avatar
October 14, 2014 at 4:28 PM
an excellent pen sara just talking about similar today with my mum love the imaginary used
Onclaud Avatar
October 14, 2014 at 10:46 AM
riveting work using the element of contrast between nature's calm and danger of disease, sara... so well done!.. huggs
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